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 // It's never perfect when I write it down the first time, or the second time, or the fifth time. But it always gets better as I go over it and over it." // // --Jane Yolen //

= Revising =

[[image:logo.jpg width="29" height="27"]]Step 1: Peer Editing
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 * Share your Google doc draft with your "Collabo Partner" #5.
 * The evaluator must make comments within the Google doc.
 * Evaluators should complete an evaluation form and share it with the author.
 * Complete the Reaction to Peer Revising form below:

[[image:logo.jpg width="30" height="28"]]Step 2: Revising Your Work

 * Submit your paper to PaperRater for stock feedback.
 * Use the tips and resources below to continue to revise your paper.

ARMS
Use the strategy below as you revise your draft.


 * A **dd words or phrases to make the story more descriptive.
 * R **emove words that are unneccessary, repetitive, or don't add to the story.
 * M **ove words around to make your story clearer, or grammatically correct.
 * S **ubstitute boring, overused words for words with more exact, descriptive value


 * If you encounter any problems or have a question, post to the wall wisher for writing assignments.

Editing/Proofing
There comes a point in any writing project when you must prepare it for publication. At this point you must edit and proofread your revised writing so that it speaks clearly and accurately. Your first main concern when editing to is to replace any words, phrases, and sentences that sound awkward or confusing. Then you should check your writing for spelling, usuage, mechanics, and grammar errors. Need more help with editing? Click here.

You're almost there! I'll signal when it's time to go on to Part 4.

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